Moriah Leila

This isn't the end is it? There is still more, right? Because I have a ton of unanswered questions and it seems like Becca has officially lost it. This isn't ...

I just have one critique. I didn’t want to, but I knew it had to be said[s], done[/s]. That's it! Well done! I am really enjoying the twists and turns ...

I've read all the chapters up to this one and have had a hard time to find anything to critique. This chapter is just as good as the previous ones, ...

GAH! My hands are shaking! I'm sorry, I'd love to critique this piece, but I just can't! Your characters are so real, and the imagery you paint so strong I ...

Okay, so you asked for us to rip it to shreds and that is exactly what I intend to do. Please don't take anything personal. I really do like your ...

Please let me know what you think of the flow of the piece, character development, am I doing too much telling and not enough showing? Is it entertaining, or are ...

I guess I have an advantage since the one above me has given some hints. I'm going to say short, with brown hair, brown eyes, perhaps a lover of eyeliner ...

Because everyone knows at least six people?

I have to agree with a lot of what has already been posted, like height is important because us girls like guys to be pyhsically larger than us that way ...

Well okay when I think of Australia these are the things that pop up in my mind: -Boomerangs -Kangaroos -Outback Steakhouse -"Put another shrimp on the barbie!" -The accent of ...

My newest story that I am working on is about a teenaged girl who feels overhsadowed by her "perfect" older sister and finds herself engaging in promiscuous relationships to make ...

Right now I am not currently reading anything but that is because I just finished reading all 7 books of the Chronicles of Narnia by C.S. Lewis. Very good read, ...

I've always written because it has just come so naturally to me. And like everyone else in this world I want to do something that will get me recognition as ...

Interesting...Your descriptions of the settings are very vivid and I like how the house is dirty even with maids bustling everywhere. However, I have no idea what time period this ...

Very good. Your protagonist is very well developed, although you did leave out minor physical details such as the color of his eyes and hair and his height. Also I ...